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« on: April 27, 2008, 18:24 » |
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I thought I'd start fresh  and okay it's like...4 months, nearly 5 months into 2008 and I'm only just starting this XD but I do have some arts I'd like to post  and I would really appreciate some feedback, especially on how I could improve my pictures tone wise since my art teacher is forever moaning on at me about tone D: Anyway, lets begin!  First off this was my 1st idea for the LTS con which I decided to draw out anyway...I think I like it more plot wise but I decided not to enter it in the end and stick with my first design...whether this was a mistake, I'm not sure...but most of my friends felt the first picture was better..*shrugs* but here is it anyway... To be honest I havnt drawn much so far this year but I hope by starting this topic it will remind me to scan more stuff in! or at least get photos of the art I am currently working on for school which was dragons and now is angels  Been fun stuff, even if it was stressful! x_x Ah well....enjoy! 
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« Reply #1 on: April 27, 2008, 19:52 » |
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ohhhh this "metal dinosaur" is familiar..... maybe is BART .. ohh GOD is Bart simpson.. the armagedon is today!  .. my poor elemantary school... the city is a disaster...  fire and death in each corner... _____ ^-^ beatiful sketch! 9.2/10.... the pencil skill in this picture is very good and the characters are perfects ....
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« Reply #2 on: April 27, 2008, 21:21 » |
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I do like this picture. It has a lot of 'youth' detailed into it  A very Bart kinda picture! I'll stand by my desicion that your Lisa picture was the better picture to enter for the LisaCon, as it looked more profesional and elegant. Whether the others agree, would be interesting to find out. I do like how you've used pencil colours to bring this picture to life, I think Bart would be happy with it.  My vote would have probably been 6/10. Both 6/10 for Technical and Story.
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« Reply #3 on: May 03, 2008, 00:11 » |
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I love your drawings, they always have a great charm and a good story behind them, you manage to fit a lot into the picture without making it too cluttered, so you notice things when you look back on it again. I really wish I could have your skill and imagination. Nowadays i need to look really hard for something to imspire me, but you produce every time  has the Lisa pic Casper mentioned been posted, sorry if it has but lack of time means i am slowly getting through reading, viewing, thinking and then writing replys. Would love to see it. Have a good weekend Carl
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« Reply #4 on: May 03, 2008, 10:45 » |
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CCD - fire and death is my speciality!  Mwhahaha! ...^_^; but thanks Casper - Thanks Mat, and well, in my mind, I couldn't think of anything Bart would want more in a picture other than him having sweet revenge on the place he loathes so much, like the rest of us Empethree - Thanks and yeah the Lisa pic Mat's on about is my LTScon entry  Thanks all! 
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« Reply #5 on: May 04, 2008, 17:28 » |
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still well behind reading posts not even got to the Lisacon stuff.... plus all the other admin stuff on the other 3 forums i help run + web server admin stuf.... arrrghhh  I shall have to make a comment on that one later 
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« Reply #6 on: May 04, 2008, 18:41 » |
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Hehe don't worry about it Empethree, take your time Just an update, I have about a week or so till my art exam so, will probably update this with photos of my A2 work once it's all done  If not, will be after the end of year art show ^_^
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« Reply #7 on: May 04, 2008, 21:50 » |
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Heyyy... I've never commented your art aswell O_O Well, better late than never  Cool pic, something Bart would like to have drawn for him. Sorry for the short comment, I'm not very good at reviewing pics x_x Anyway, I like this pic 
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« Reply #8 on: May 04, 2008, 22:07 » |
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Ignored commenting on this one cos it's hard to say much about it. Oh well, let's have a go at it.  Now that's a picture straight out of Bart's daydreams. ^^ Spot on. It's fun to watch, feels pretty detailed and all that. The coloring makes the picture a bit warm, and all the chaos going on around it makes it flaming hot. Very cute. :d I'm gonna go with Casper, despite being a good picture, I still like the one you entered for LisaCon better, at least storywise. This isn't a bad idea, but... uh forget it, not gonna be able to justify saying that your other picture was better storywise, I just like it better. 
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« Reply #9 on: May 09, 2008, 23:41 » |
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Black_ravenI even copied the link to the last picture on my forum  It's great, complex and funny. Also, I like crayons. About the plot - I suspect where is real Bart somewhere, laughing in the evil manner and managing the remote.  Poor bot finally has realized his fantasies... Wonderful drawing, I look forward for more. Maybe less violent ones. 
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« Reply #10 on: May 10, 2008, 18:37 » |
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El Barto - It's quite alright, don't worry about having to do long in depth comments  Just glad you liked my art ^_^, Thanks!  Kasper -  don't mind that you like my Lisa pic better but not quite sure why you do after your comment O_o, but don't worry if you can't explain it,..guess Lisa is just more appealing here  Thanks though  Serge - hehe  I don't mind you doing that at all  Thanks very much *feels honored* ^_^
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« Reply #11 on: May 10, 2008, 19:22 » |
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Black_ravennot quite sure why you do after your comment O_o lol yer, I found it weird trying to make sense of it, so I decided not to. :X I'd probably have given the Bart picture the same score, or perhaps even one point higher. Just had another look and it makes sense now. I don't know how you drew this one, but the lines on Lisa are looking a bit thick, and the colors on them are also kind of distracting. It really does mess with the overall rating, sorry. :/ Story-wise I like the Lisa picture a little bit better, technically I like the Bart picture better than the Lisa picture which I technically like better than the Bart picture. Guh... o_O Anyway, the above quote probably explains why it was hard to decide. Glad I figured that out. Now instead what doesn't make sense is WHY I couldn't figure that out before... Apparently something is still wrong. This is what I get for trying to arrange my thoughts! -.- ... >_>
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« Reply #12 on: May 10, 2008, 19:35 » |
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About the only think which bothers me with this picture is the fact it's coloured with colouring pencils. They so rarely give the best final result (though you've managed to do an impressive job with them on the fire reflections and the green eye, so maybe I should just shut my mouth...). I *love* the idea and the expressions and the little details like the shooting and skinner dieing though. 
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« Reply #13 on: May 11, 2008, 11:00 » |
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I do like the fac that it's been colored with pencils. It just makes me admire the artist's willforce for anything  i'd never have the guts to pencil color such a huge and complex picture  Talkign aobut the picture itself, it's marvellous and i'm usre that if you submitted this to Lisacon your votes wouldn't have changed much cause even if it lacks Lisa or cuteness or unicorns  it's still a mind blowing pic, really funny, full of detail, well drawn. Bart looks kickass in his attire and its definitely something he'd choose  The fight of King-Kong ian memory is well represented, again full of little details... it's something that i'd see without problems on the cover of one of the official Bart Simpsons comics. 
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« Reply #14 on: May 14, 2008, 23:02 » |
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Kasper - Hehe you shouldn't worry about all this  , thanks overall though  glad you like my art in the first place X) DB -Aw, I tend to use colouring pencils often though , they're quick, easy and generally great to use imo  but then again it's one of the tools I've had most practise in throughout my life so far  Anyway, thank you  , I appreciate you picked up on some of the details I included  Thanks again! ^_^ SimpReal - Yey! Colouring Pencil Fans, UNITE!  Besides, Killing robots and machines/creatures can easily defeat Lisa any day *is hunted down by Lisa fans* D: ahhh!  , I shall make up to you guys, I swear!... *Lisa fans put down their weapons*  ...*Ahem*, anyway, overall I was pleased with both my entries which was why I had such difficulty in deciding which one to use. Thanks for the reassurance though Marco  and all of you really ^_^ Anyway, time for something new I guess as I said been working on a lot of school art recently, and well, exams are here now, it's 15 hours (5 hours a day) and today was my first day...it's not finished, and unfortunately I don't have a brilliant picture of it, but here is my final piece for my exam so far  As I said, angel themed  Although it's not featured, an awful lot of prep went into this which, once after all is marked and put up for show, I shall upload here ^_^ Oh and reason it's wonky is its very wide, on a big role of watercolour paper, and I couldn't fit everything in >_< Ah well, I shall upload a picture tomorrow, and Friday (final day) to show my development of this too  Hopefully should be in a better quality too....well..hope y'all enjoy for now 
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« Reply #15 on: May 14, 2008, 23:47 » |
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impressive piece of art ... composition and subject is enigmatic .... without the color range is very sober .... beam used wisely tones green ... there are still details to improve .. however, is a striking painting .. is a art with a lot of life and peace...  PD: sorry by my bad english....
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« Reply #16 on: May 15, 2008, 00:18 » |
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Don't care much for this kind of art (awesome way to open a review! ^^), seems great so far though. That is to say it looks like kind of a generic one-of-those paintings.  Which is probably good for whatever my thought's worth, if I can't tell what makes other great artists paintings better than yours, maybe you're doing something right... but them geeky art professors will go on about the aesthetics, something I can't say a word about, because I don't see much of it in any of these... things. =d You're totally offended by this right now! On a lighter note, I could go for some of that funky cubism!  You're a shoe-in in any case, you'll win this contest pass the exams for sure. (= Or you won't. Guess that's what the fuss is about. Stop reading my comments.
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« Reply #17 on: May 15, 2008, 16:17 » |
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CCD - Thanks Gustavo! ^_^ Kasper - Weelll, everyone has different tastes  The sort of art I do at my school is "Fine Art" anyway, I would rather do something more cartoony, obviously  But, so far I've enjoyed painting it!  Here's an update, bought a proper camera with me this time, managed to get a bit of a better quality picture but still couldn't fit all of it in >_< Here's the best one I have of it and a few close ups  I feel I've improved with the colours more  Just 5 hours to go in "perfecting" it!
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« Reply #18 on: May 15, 2008, 19:10 » |
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I think it's pretty awsome so far. You should do "fine art" more often. 
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« Reply #19 on: May 15, 2008, 19:57 » |
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Wow, impressive. Truely I would never guessed such talent. It shows clearly much more your skills than the stuff I have seen before. It looks so realistic. And very nice motive. 
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« Reply #20 on: May 15, 2008, 21:28 » |
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Ahh, much warmer tone to it than yesterday. Definitely an improvement!
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« Reply #21 on: May 16, 2008, 16:05 » |
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Well... I'VE FINISHEEEED!! WOO!!  !!!!! I'm in hysterics! Haha, I'm happy/sad in a weird way cos in some ways I'm gonna miss it but then after 15 hours of painting, I'm so releaved to have it all done  I got a picture of my friend holding it up but unfortunatly, I forgot the camera >_< Again, so used my phone ...again... so it's the best I could get...it prob doesn't look like it's changed all that much but I added a LOT more detail and texture into the wings  Should probably shower right now cos I'm still covered in paint  but here it is! Thanks guys for the comments/support over the last three days  *hugs all* Bubiiiiii! *runs off laughing like a loony*
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« Reply #22 on: May 16, 2008, 23:04 » |
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Wow, Rachel, it's so impressive... I've never seen so many wings on a single pic.  * Dagdamor wonders if all those feathers enough for a pillow LISA: Daaag! Stop ruining it! Sorry  It's really good. And the colors are so vibrant and bright... I like it! Explains the "fine art" term for me 
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« Reply #23 on: May 16, 2008, 23:43 » |
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Yup, really impressive. I was saving my review for this last pic. (No, I wasn't, I totaly forgot about this thread -.-' I'm sorry) Anyway... I like it. It's impressive, you did a good job. I can't find anything more to say. I was simply astonished by that pic. It's really good 
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« Reply #24 on: May 17, 2008, 00:58 » |
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**Me makes an expletive remark in awe** Oh my god!....... That is just completely and utterly awesome. Almost left me speechless...... ok gotta find some words lol You have an AWESOME talent. I have seen the stuff you have posted on here before and I have been impressed but now this is a totally different league..... what a stunningly beautiful piece. The colours look fantastic, and I bet the camera does not do that justice. The size of the picture is impressive too. I remember my Art work was big but never that big.... sadly all the stuff I did for my when I was at school was destroyed in fire. Luckily I walked away with an A lol. Shame I cant post my stuff. This totally rips apart the stuff I did to get an A.....  One question.... was it intended to have legs attached to the bottom 
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« Reply #25 on: May 17, 2008, 01:45 » |
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"best_pic_i_culd_get_FINISHED_ART_A2_FINAL_PIECE.jpg"? How about the ONLY pic you could get finished! You should be ashamed...
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Yer, I can't see the changes since yesterday, but we get to see the size of it properly now. :X And a pair of legs to boot! ^^ Nice one anyway, I thought you were a talented artist, but I had no idea you could do things like this. x_X Now go cram it into your scanner so we can get a good look at it. :d
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« Reply #26 on: May 17, 2008, 22:14 » |
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the last version of your picture allows the viewer to discover the symbolism of the image ... , It would be nice to have a full size version of the same ...  congratulations ...I really envy your skill to the art .... The skills to paint with a brush are different from those of the drawing with the computer ...  Thanks by sharing
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« Reply #27 on: May 18, 2008, 17:22 » |
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*doesn't know what to say*  Just,..thanks very much guys  I do appreciate the feedback and I believe some of these are the best compliments on my art I'veever got O_o..so..thanks very very much  I'm glad you all like! ^_^ *crosses fingers for an A!*
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« Reply #28 on: June 05, 2008, 20:33 » |
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I'm alive, I'm still aliiiivve!!! ^_^; Okay I have been busy though, with exams/revision and such so, have not been able to scan for AGES..however, tbh anything I've done offline has been pretty crappy anyway  However, over the past month or so, I've been practicing with digital painting with my friend and one of the student art teachers  Let's just call him Mr.K  Anyway, been having help with him and photoshop,tablet stuff and have attempted to overcome "painting" digitaly, sooo no lineart involved as such like I usually do!  !! So, this was a challenge, but I feel I've done well. Just used a simple sketch of Bastet though.... Unfortunately, never got to finish it, and the latest version/s he's got since he accidently cut and paste them from my laptop rather than copy! >_< So, for now I'm just gonna post an example from before this Tuesday when I had only just started blending everything together ^_^ I know it's not brilliant but it shall do for now  This is mostly just to prove I HAVE been drawing and working  Sooo heres version 6/8 of my first "digital painting" as such, Bastet 
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« Reply #29 on: June 06, 2008, 01:04 » |
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That is really good......... I am impressed. You have done a fantastic job so far. Really cannot wait to see a later version
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« Reply #30 on: June 08, 2008, 04:28 » |
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Hello Rachel! is a pic with a good performance in terms of technical and creativity  ... I think that the contour's lines need some adjustments ... However the result is extremely pleasing to the eyes, the color gamma is warm (shades of yellow in the background and in the character) ...  ... thanks by post your art
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