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« on: April 22, 2008, 04:46 » |
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This was suppose to be the front page for a group I'm creating,but it was not good enough, sadly. I guess its ok if I post it here. more to come..... 
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« Reply #1 on: April 22, 2008, 11:25 » |
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Heh. Nice pose. Maybe it's me, but the ear comes up kinda high.
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« Reply #2 on: April 22, 2008, 14:22 » |
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This is the originality! I think a good drawing, aesthetics is perfect and unusual style .. (caramba realmente amo ese toque frances en el dibujo y ese lapiz en la oreja es genial!) thanks by posr your art Omar 
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« Reply #3 on: April 22, 2008, 19:36 » |
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Nice one. And what a magnificent hair she has. But what I like more is her face expression. The colours that chosen are easy and gentle.
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« Reply #4 on: April 23, 2008, 06:30 » |
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OPUS Looking nice! I like that pencil in particular. It's funny that some of the spikey that present as the construction lines, absent in the final drawing - like there is a different sketch behind Maggie. The shading is also well done.
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« Reply #5 on: April 23, 2008, 22:22 » |
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« Reply #6 on: April 24, 2008, 16:13 » |
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The colors vesrion is the best ! For some reason my mind can not be away from those eyes  .... modeling is so cute, and though unusual colors are great  lisa says: gustavo save the image).... BTW: ¡ahora en español! bien creo que aqui sere mas descriptivo el modelado es muy elegante las lineas auqnue no totalmente saneadas (o sea sin el esqueleto que utilizaste para la construcción de tu dibujo) no se toman en cuenta en el resultado final de tu dibujo.. el cual es encantador  sobra decir que los ojos de maggie son el mejor detalle aqui.. no se por que .. pero los he estado contemplando largo rato...
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« Reply #7 on: April 25, 2008, 21:24 » |
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OPUSGreen eyes  child of the nature... Like the colored version a lot, good that you decided to repaint the pacifier the more "natural" colors. Well... I have a doubt that grownup Maggie would wear her sucker in any and all circumstances, looks like a stereotype to me. Also, her hair looks too simple and "heavy", although I'm not sure how her hair really should look like  Those are all nitpicks. Great job with her clothes, and I like the idea. Although, Lisa would be a better candidate for Pocahontas crossover pic IMHO, because unlike Mag, she likes both the nature and Indian culture a lot. Nice picture, keep drawing!
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« Reply #8 on: April 25, 2008, 21:25 » |
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The pose is nice, but the green eyes scare me...
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« Reply #9 on: April 27, 2008, 20:34 » |
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Me and my silly big Melon. If I would have planned instead of focusing on a silly situation days ago then I would have a entry just fine, but for now, this is something I did today for the competition. It was against the rules to be accepted , so I'm just going to post it here for your hard critique and opinion.
Please use hard critique
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« Reply #10 on: April 27, 2008, 22:29 » |
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I'm not very good with critique so I made this... it's what Bill Morrison has done for me when I got stuff wrong :3 I just drew the mistakes over the top of your picture. And sorry, Paint Shop Pro was the only program I had to do it. I hope it helps.
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« Reply #11 on: April 27, 2008, 22:49 » |
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Thanks a lot , Vicky.  Wow, man. Its amazing how it differs from the original groening style, plus that left hand was kinda messed up. : Of course I wanted to make Bart a little older, so I took his big belly off.
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« Reply #12 on: April 29, 2008, 15:54 » |
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I like your styl better like that "standart" groening one... keep your styl. How about some completely done work, finished pictures instead of scetches? With backround and such things. Would be nice. 
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« Reply #13 on: April 29, 2008, 15:59 » |
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Hard critique? Heh, I can't find anything to criticise, sorry :/ Anyway, I like that pic, and like CoD said, keep your style and never change it  And I would also like to ask for some pics with backgrounds and stuff like that 
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« Reply #14 on: May 03, 2008, 00:01 » |
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i gotta agree with the "keep your style" posts here....... If every picture was groening perfect, then it shows no individuality, not saying i dont like those pictures and its the poses used that make the picture, but the little deviations mark a charming individuality and someone elses take on things. The promotional 2 picture is fantastic, it shows a grown up Maggie how I would imagine she would be, the eyes are a tad too green for my liking, they distract from the rest of the picture, but thats my fav pic of these. Good work  Carl
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« Reply #15 on: May 04, 2008, 18:35 » |
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Although your art is not completely spot on, you still manage to pull it off with the style in which you draw the characters My fav so far is the first promotional art you've done  Eye catching and well drawn  Though as El Barto's mentioned, would be nice to see more background work sometime  Otherwise, it's all good work 
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« Reply #16 on: May 09, 2008, 08:28 » |
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Hey, i like the green eyes  I agree with what others have said more or less, sure your style is quite different from the original Groening's... Vicky's "correction" to your picture showed that in a very convincing way. Still, i wouldn't push you to try and change your way of drawing the characters, aside maybe a couple of recurring "mistakes" that you often do, for example... the "fat" lower lip overlapping the neck, the skinny neck/big head, the arms and legs having sometimes too "realistic" elbows and knees. That said, i think your "promo art 2" picture is the one i love best, a bit for the green eyes too, much more for Maggie's expressio nand nice clothing, and is overall drawn in a very personal and distinctive way. Looking forward for more. 
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« Reply #17 on: May 09, 2008, 23:11 » |
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OPUS"Bart_el_Barto" - hey, it's great! I know you wanted some criticism, but I don't see much mistakes on this drawing. And even Vicky's version doesn't differ much (although those modifications make sense, most of them are tribute to the canonical Simpsons style, not real proportion mistakes or such). Bart has nice expression and the sketch turned out nicely IMHO. My only plot-related nitpick is that while he holds paint in his hand, he's unable to use the slingshot.  But that's a small thing.
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« Reply #18 on: May 25, 2008, 22:23 » |
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Hah, hah.hah! Lisa rivalry with Allison was always and will always be something to consider. Fan-art included.
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« Reply #19 on: May 25, 2008, 22:55 » |
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Aaargh! My eyes! o_O Not sure why, but this kind of Lisa looks really disturbing  Allison turned out much better. I hope this is just a matter of tastes... and other artists will find it better, but Lisa, especially her nose and mouth, looks so weird to me... On the other hand, her dress looks good, for sleeve-less one. Nice touches with that side-slit and bottom spikes (Lisa wouldn't be Lisa without them).
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« Reply #20 on: May 26, 2008, 00:23 » |
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You made her alot human, but I don't think that's how she'd look like as a human. She doesn't even have a slight overbite... o_O But that's just how I'd imagine her. It seems you're not. And Allison is really better, like Dag said.
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« Reply #21 on: May 30, 2008, 16:55 » |
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Does anyone here knows Cantinflas? Ok, this is a concept drawing of an animation I'm working on , not just scribbles moving around. It will take me a whole more time to do this animation that the maggie avatar thingie. I just wanted to find out if any of you guys know Cantinflas. He was a great Mexican comedian during the 70's. Sadly, he died a few years ago. He was very humanitarian. While alive he built schools and hospitals for the needed. 
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« Reply #22 on: May 30, 2008, 23:17 » |
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OPUSAh yes, Cantinflas, or Mario Moreno if you want to call him by his actual name... I don't know him all that well, but I've definitely heard of him. And judging from the pictures I've seen of him, you've done a nice cartoon adaptation here. 
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« Reply #23 on: June 01, 2008, 02:59 » |
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Thank you, G.H. I knew someone was going to recognize the pseunomium, but I never thought it was going to be you. Yeah, it was kinda of hard to get him look cartoonish without messing it up. Right now I've done about 10 drawings but because he is suppose to be dancing thats quite a few, still. I have a long way to completly finish.  Do you remember how he used to dance with those pants halfway down. It cracks me up everytime I see his movies and white humor. Talking about something else. Tomorrow are the finals for the Mexican-soccer tournament. Santos vs Cruz Azul. Ofcourse I dont like the people from the capital, and because I was born up in the northen states I'm betting on Santos Laguna to win. Monterrey, my native city, lost in the semifinals just because of one goal. So sad!  Ok, here it is....  Sorry, I've just noticed that his ear is way too small. Talk about not seeing your mistakes while drawing , but then seeing them later after is too late.
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« Reply #24 on: June 01, 2008, 21:46 » |
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OPUS Hehe, yes... and it may have been difficult, but I really think you pulled it off well. Not so long ago I saw someone else's cartoon adaptation of him, it looked pretty similar to yours.
Nice new pic by the way, Bart's ear actually doesn't look too small, and if you hadn't mentioned it I probably wouldn't have noticed it.
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« Reply #25 on: June 01, 2008, 23:20 » |
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Loving the sketches........ simple but exceptionally done. Lisa and Alison pic..... hmm i think alison is drawn exceptionally well.... but I agree with dag that Lisa looks a bit strange..... the expression reminds me of those robots in cartoons which try and blend in as a human with hilarious results...... gotta say great idea though 
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« Reply #26 on: June 25, 2008, 00:26 » |
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*Not new art* I drew this last year.  and I felt like posting the oc if anyone was interested. 
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« Reply #27 on: June 25, 2008, 15:22 » |
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hey! "yo recuerdo esto" ... (i can remenber this) and yes.. i am very curios in understand your artistic skills and too about the others artists in this forum.. me like the study ... heh heh thanks by sharing  "gracias tomaré (o robaré) algo de tu experiencia y tecnicas... bajo el concepto de prestadas" in special about the perspective and the construction models....  thanks! 
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« Reply #28 on: August 21, 2008, 17:48 » |
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*Warning* This pic shows plenty amounts of yellowI got a little bit of time, and seriously I got bored and a little non motivated to even go to work today. There has been a lot of the same lately. I drew this as a quicky and at the end I ended up coloring it in a way I never tried before. The result, well, I cannot say and is up to you to concrit this image not mine. Enjoy! 
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« Reply #29 on: August 21, 2008, 19:50 » |
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Looks pretty good, Omar. My only complaint is that the outline of her tail underwater looks a bit crude, just like someone drew a shaky pencil line. But the coloring is good (she even looks a bit tan) and the face and body are perfect.
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« Reply #30 on: August 21, 2008, 20:05 » |
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I really like that. especially the hair for some reason 
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« Reply #31 on: August 21, 2008, 20:12 » |
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Like that picture,as D.B> said... i love the hair too, it has an "angular" crudeness to the spikes which actually suits the picture. Again the fault is that pencil line which looks out of place and where the rock dissapears into the water... just looks wrong. Otherwise great picture!
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« Reply #32 on: August 21, 2008, 20:41 » |
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como siempre mi ingles no me permitira expresarme en un 100% ... enviare un PM con detalles...  anyway...  .... me like the soft colours and the blur in your pic.. The final work look fantastic!
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