Wow Kat that is pretty good work there. This something I would like to try to do, if I had the attention span to get past doing single drawings at a time. Most of the designs are spot on and your style is easily seen. The only thing that I think is a bit odd is the size of lisa's eyes, they seem a bit large for her head. Keep it up and I cant wait to see how much you have done when I get back from Boot Camp.

Very good work on this. I can't wait to see the rest of the comic, too. Everything looks on-model, and very cute.

Nice one Kat, very well drawn. The story behind it too is very good. Looking forward to seeing more of this as it progresses.

As commented before, The eyes are big, but I do like this style of your drawing, it seems to add a sort of added cuteness to the pictures.

I think this is one of the best so far, can see a great improvement as time goes on

That's wonderful Kat! That must've taken a lot of time to draw and I hope you can keep this up until it's finished.

I do have one tip/nitpick, though. On the third page the order of panels isn't right. The order of panels in a comic should always be from top to bottom and from left to right. On the third page you started on the right, which could make your comic be harder to read, because it could be read in the wrong order. You can fix this by using arrows to make clear how your comic should be read.

Keep up the good work!

laguna sky
I'm currently planning out Page four and I'm hoping I can have it up and done by next week. Thanks!

Dagdamor
Thanks, I wanted Lisa to have a ponytail for change of hairstyle.

ametur_poet
Dagdamor
Empethree
Gustavo
ALM

Thanks Guys! You do smashing work to!

Suusje
Thanks for the tip, I will use that next time so I don't get muddled again

Kat, i'm absolutely impressed by this!

I must be honest with you.. when i first saw your pictures, i would have never expected so much of an improvement, but holy Lisa, look at what you're doing here. You remember me in many ways of the legend that was Jake Lennington, your style has a lot similar to him (i bet he was an inspiration to you as to me for starting to draw?).
But your characters are, honestly, way more likeable than his (i never liked his buffed up Maggie from the future), and you put a lot of effort in what imho is the main focus of a comic like this. Character interactions, and expressions, and you're very good at etting the feelings accross: your masterpiece being the last panel with Lisa hugging the teddybear, such a powerful conclusion to a panel involving once again sibling rivalry with Lisa coming out sad from it.
Yeah, the drwings are not always perfect and some might need some work still, but i see more greatness than fail here... on a ratio of 9/1 maybe. the only blatant errors i can find are, as already said, Bart's face in 6th panel and Lisa's in 4th panel of the first page (overbite too long and round).
Homer and Marge i nthe first panel are drawn flawlessly!! I hope you'll get them involved again in the story.

Well, what can i say, you're improving so much it leaves me quite dazzled. I definitely hope to see more of this comic. Keep up the great work! 

P.S.: Oh, something not related to the art itself... maybe you could try a bit of cleanup of the pencil smudges on photosop, if you dont plan to make a complete retouching/coloring later.

My art sucks and you know it!

Damn it, that's a very nice, cute comix, Maggiecute. You really has got a enough of skills to do such a complex job like comic. What to say, I love Lisa's hairdo, agreed with previous posters. Emotions - this is just great, all personages has recognizable expressions, like it show. Good work again.

Another thing i might add that i didnt before. The lisa in panel 3 is a perfectly drawn Lisa in my opinion, expression perfect, almost like i just saw it from the series itself...