Looking good! Always nice to see the progression of fan-art.

Nice work with the hair; its original and it doesnt look messy or out of place. I think she could do with a face lift though, literaly

Her face seems to droop downwards. I understand you want her to be looking slightly down, but dont forget to make her eyes slanted as well as her nose and mouth, otherwise it looks like its drooping down. Also, the eye lashes should be on her eye-lid instead of the line its on at the moment (which shouldnt fully exist if her eyes are half closed or closed). And also, top right hand corner of the picture is missing a little bit of sky.
You've done well creating her reflection, and I'm also pleased with the size her arms and legs comparative to her body. Her head I think is a little big, but I think its more to do with the neck than the head.
I really like this piccie... for me personally it brings a bit of nostalgia. But even without that its a nice peice, even if Lis' is a little gloomy. Nice one!
