Well everyone, I decided to throw my hat into the ring and post my story. It is nowhere near done, but it will give you a good idea of what is to come.

One thing has been nagging me for the past few weeks though and because of it I wanted to get a few opinons on what I should do (Dont worry, you dont need to read the story to tell me your thoughts). The Question is this: "Should I change my story to be many short stories using the characters or should I keep working on the long version?"

I am beginning to think that the short stories would be better and more fulfilling for my mind, but I know there is the problem of dealing with my own personal characters. Those problems being things like, "Will the reader know who he is, or will the story continue and make one long story in many parts?"

It is those questions that make me wonder what would be better. Please help me and tell me what you think. (Laguna bends down on knees and begs)

Yeesshh. I have been away for far too long. I just read this today and i want to say thanks for the review. I intend to make the story long, but the problem that i have is the fact that i write chapters that are all over the story. I just can't write in sequence, that is why i wondered if I should make it a bunch of short stories.

Anyway, i will hopefully have some more up soon. I have written a bit more, but i am focusing on a really awsome and jaw dropping ending. I do however have a special feature for it that will be put on a different topic later. I have reformatted my hard drive and need to find the saved data containing it.

Be Back Soon.

I've only glanced over the first few sentences, since I'm heading to bed in a second, but I do plan to read them tomorrow.

A question I have - What is this health problem that Lisa needed an operation for? (If it's explained in the story, then just tell me so) But I'm quite curious.