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Author Topic: [REWRITE] Death of a Simpson  (Read 1584 times)
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« Reply #15 on: December 06, 2009, 00:40 »

CalculatedChaos
I read it and I like it Big Grin

Your story is well written with a good integration into the Simpsons universe (there is a lot of references to old episodes and they are well used, like this reference to the You are Lisa Simpson note).
I also like how characters act in your story (they are themselves), especially Maggie.

I will not make comments about your writting skills because I'm not good in English Tongue.
You put a lot of details which make your story more realistic, and you manage to make your story funny even if the main plot isn't funny at all (the last sentence made me laught Gigi).


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« Reply #16 on: December 06, 2009, 22:26 »

Thanks for reading! I've got a Christmas Carol adaptation on the way, it should be ready in time for the holidays.
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