CalculatedChaosI read it and I like it

Your story is well written with a good integration into the Simpsons universe (there is a lot of references to old episodes and they are well used, like this reference to the
You are Lisa Simpson note).
I also like how characters act in your story (they are themselves), especially Maggie.
I will not make comments about your writting skills because I'm not good in English

.
You put a lot of details which make your story more realistic, and you manage to make your story funny even if the main plot isn't funny at all (the last sentence made me laught

).