That is exactly what I am going to do - it is going to look much better! ^^

Besides this, I am working on something on double size paper (painting size), non-Simpsons, something from my novel 'Belial', took me 10 hours and I am only done with the outlines. If anyone is interisted...

My personal to draw list:

• Lisa Simpson - You´re my satellite
• Sarah from my novel 'Belial'
• Comission, G.H.´s women
• Lisa Simpson & Milhouse - Summer wine
• Lrrrve

Of cause, besides the colors - this picture needs correction in proportions and perspectives. It was just a scribble and now I am going to make something out of it. ^_^

Well, matter of fact, its women, cause there are a bunch of scribbles of her on the sheet.
The picture can sure take while (working almost on all stuff at the same time) - but you don´t have a deadline after all. btw, is it okay if I ask who she is (nice asian touch)? The girl that used to be with you, right? I can see why you want me to draw her... I love personal pictures!

CargoOfDarkness
That Lisa is pretty adorable with all her new dress and antenna-hat. Really, the design of her clothes and shoes is so fantastic and dreamy. I understand what you mean when cannot finish the work. It's always hard to come back from the apathy, when you doing nothing.

wow.... o_O excellent lines (and curves) 10/10 

*seconds after.

Lisa: hey Gustavo! x_X
Gustavo: er... sorry Lisa... -_-''

Astonishing! I didn't expect you evolved so much your skills in the figure drawign realm, the woman looks gorgeous, beautiful, and perfectly shaped. HEr face is feminine but kind of... rough too, very interesting and attractive. The background is chock full of wonderful lively deails, both in the foreground and in the background...
really an awesome piece. Both thumbs up... 


but allow me just a little remark, please, don't be offended: those hands... well, the hands are the "black spot" over an otherwise perfect picture. ^_^

This is a Major piece of artwork you have here.  I concur with marco.  Your improvement on the human figure is astonishing.  Great, great work.   There are no flaws as far as I can see, well, probably only her right hand, but I'm being picky.  The BG is amazingly detailed too.   Congratulations on a pic like this and I can't wait to see it colored.   Thanks for showing this to us , Frank!


I like the american style on this one.

Those fingers creep me out.

Her body curves are excellent, and so is the background, very detailed. Her nose looks a tad wierd, but that'll work itself out with shading, I think.

Her lips look big. It's probably not by much, but to me it looks like they are one or two sizes too large.

But the hands really are the major flaw in this otherwise excellent picture. Looking at them separatly, her right one seems to have very little "hand" and mostly "fingers". Somewhat looks like an old woman's long, thin fingers. The thumb looks more like a 5th finger, not a thumb. Looking at her left hand, it's better, but the proportions are still off.

By comparing the two hands, you see noticable difference that you possible cannot be satisfied with.