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« on: August 07, 2008, 22:48 »
Yes, it is a bit early. I still need to finish/polish DoaS, but the other night I was hit with an idea that has taken hold.
Basically I plan to write the story of Bleeding Gums Murphy's childhood in Capital City. (Dr.) Julius Hibbert, I think that's his name, will play a big role as Murphy's (little?) brother. We may even discover why he laughs so much as an adult.
Specifics aren't set in stone and I am interested in a collaboration with one maybe two other writers so PM me if you are intrigued.
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« Reply #1 on: August 18, 2008, 21:22 »
I'm not a writer so i cannot collaborate, but i was quite surprised by your idea! Smile I think it's very original for sure, and that you want to get Hibbert in too could make for some surely interesting reading... er.. i don't have much things to say as you noticed, hehe.
Just wanted to congratulate you on willing to search for some different things to write about in the simpsonic world! Smile
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« Reply #2 on: August 18, 2008, 22:44 »
Well as I've mentioned, Death of a Simpson is my first attempt at a fanfic (and the first thing I've written and actually shown to other people). The response has been pretty positive, even after posting it on 2 other Simpsons sites,so I'll probably go through with it collaborators or without. Wink
Oh, I wanted to thank you again for allowing me to use your scene from 'Sanctuary', Marco. A heads up, I posted it on NHC and made sure to credit both you and Simpsons Realities. Their response was general awe. Big Grin
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« Reply #3 on: August 18, 2008, 22:50 »
Sorry. Here's my double post (I ran out of post space) emoticon... Sad
Same deal with Gary's MT2, though no comments on it yet (picture-wise).
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« Reply #4 on: August 24, 2008, 23:55 »
Quote from: CalculatedChaos on August 07, 2008, 22:48
Yes, it is a bit early. I still need to finish/polish DoaS, but the other night I was hit with an idea that has taken hold.
Basically I plan to write the story of Bleeding Gums Murphy's childhood in Capital City. (Dr.) Julius Hibbert, I think that's his name, will play a big role as Murphy's (little?) brother. We may even discover why he laughs so much as an adult.
Specifics aren't set in stone and I am interested in a collaboration with one maybe two other writers so PM me if you are intrigued.

* is intregued. I was thinking of doing a backstory for him as part of my All Roads Lead To Capitol City saga. If you want we can to a collaberation.
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« Reply #5 on: August 25, 2008, 00:11 »
*celebrates*
Welcome to LTS, Vanguard!
(I hope your disagreements with a few members in the other thread hasn't soured the experience for you.)
I'm still fastidiously trying to wrap up my other project, DoaS, but there is only one chapter left to write.
I'll contact you through PM soon and see about coordinating with you somehow if you're still interested. Probably next week or the one after as I may need some down time to collect myself.
Writing is very draining...
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« Reply #6 on: August 25, 2008, 18:32 »
Though I dont do much on my own Simpsons fic anymore, I would like to at least give any help that is needed. This includes proof reading and whatever, I might even have an idea for you if i'm lucky enough to pull my mind out of Cali's Life (as so called to shorten the name.)
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« Reply #7 on: August 25, 2008, 20:24 »
Im up for a bit of reading and critique if needed Smile. Not so good on the writing side so i'll leave that to the pros!
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« Reply #8 on: August 25, 2008, 22:50 »
Thanks Laguna & Carl!
One idea I had today, which I'd like to get a concensus on...

What do you guys think of Armin Tamzarian in a (sort of) antagonistic role?
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« Reply #9 on: August 25, 2008, 23:39 »
Early days of Armin Tamzarian huh? Nice idea. As long as he ends up in front of a judge by running him over with his motorcycle. Tongue
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« Reply #10 on: August 26, 2008, 00:33 »
It's still in the very preliminary stages, I was thinking of using him as either a mentor who eventually shows his true colors to young Murphy. Or a constant source of humiliation and bullying.
Haven't really thought on how much he will be involved yet, though...

@Gars: That may be an interesting wind down scene towards the end. I'll keep it in mind. Tongue
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« Reply #11 on: September 01, 2008, 02:50 »
To be honest, and you can all beat me later, I have totally forgotten who Armin is. I feel slightly ashamed but not in the least bit surprised
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« Reply #12 on: September 01, 2008, 03:25 »
Armin Tamzarian is Seymour Skinner's real name. When he enlisted in the army and was sent to Vietnam he met the real Seymour Skinner who ended up being Armin's mentor. The real Skinner was eventually captured. Armin took over his life on a whim because he couldn't bring himself to break the news to Agnes once he got back.

That's basically what happened.

Now then... onto the beatings!!

*cracks knuckles*
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« Reply #13 on: September 05, 2008, 00:51 »
Not sure this qualifies as FanFiction and it's not worth a new thread, but I wrote a freestyle poem today at work. It's a part of the process of getting into the subject matter for this story, I suppose.

This short piece is done from the perspective of Bleeding Gums Murphy that night in 'Moanin Lisa' and the last few stanza's are from the moment in the episode where Lisa first sees her idol and introduces herself.
Anyways, sorry for the quality. I sucked at poems in school...

"Not a Hero"

I am not a hero.
I never changed the world,
Saved a life, healed a friend.
I never hoped for more,
Wished for better, set a trend.

I am a fool,
Not a hero.

The life I've led,
The paths I've fled,
All for naught.
Be worth more dead.

No, I am not a hero,
Certainly not a saint.

Age and sex,
Color or creed.
Deep down inside,
We all still bleed!

I ask you now,
O Lord, my God, the Father,
Hear my prayer,
Upon this starlit bridge,
My heart filled bursting with despair.
I never begged for blood,
So, please, stop this flood!
It's too much, and much too fast to bear!

Am I so vain,
That I'd steal your pain,
For a chance at honest feeling?

It's numbing now,
The window closing.
My time is near,
No need
To fear
The reaper...

...

What's this?
Redemption, you say?
Salvation in the eyes of a child?

Perhaps God has a plan,
For this old man,
To rise above his station.

I am not a hero, no...
But maybe there's still time,
For hope.
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« Reply #14 on: September 06, 2008, 01:01 »
heh, oh yeah thats right. I totally forgot about that. A one time name to the story-line is kind of hard to remember sometimes. And the poem is good, I can tell that there was a lot on your mind when you wrote it. I cant comment on it other then that.
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