OK I have taken the earlier script format I did last year and started to flesh it out into a story format.
The ideas I have been thinking off are now going to be rolled in to later chapters as opposed to a seperate "episode" as in the script formats I have been doing.
I am going to probably expand the original episode's 3 acts into the first 4 or 5 chapters of the larger story. Episode 2 will probably take it to chapter 8-10.
The chapters are shorter parts of the acts and thus major changes of scene are now in different chapters.
Thos who did read the script will know the outcome of the early part of the story but all new ideas are going to crop up as well as some of the ideas i had as the continuation. All I will tell you that a major character will die.
As I wasn't the best at english myself (me fail english....ect ect) I know that my writing skills are rubbish to say the least. So to begin i am just posting chapter 1. So I can get some feedback on writing ect, or weather I should just return to the script format lol. I know i said I would never attemtpt to write a story but much kudos to CalculatedChaos to get me eager to try
Chapter 2 is actually completed and really starts off the main content of the story, but wanted to get some feedback to see what can be changed.
So here it is - Chapter 1:
http://www.ejnmedia.co.uk/simpsons/RelativeInsanityCh1.rtf
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