Finally got round to reading it.

The last chapter is as good of the rest. A lot of heartfelt emotion and love in it. A definately recommended story to read through.

Brought a warm smile to my face, thank you!

I give it an A

Small update: Here's two pictures I commisioned as part of an art trade. (the story 'Caleb' posted the other day by Vanguard is my part)
The first is by Dewey Finn of NHC and MT2, still just in sketch format.
The second is by Astray, also of NHC, and is fully inked and colored! She's got two more on the way, one of which will hopefully be done tommorow!
Thanks guys!

Dewey's picture had a minor language barrier problem, but they are sitting near the reflecting pool in the last chapter (Lisa's sacrifice). He's actually got a running series called 'Adolescence' which features the characters at the same ages so he's got experience with the older versions.
Astray's next picture is supposedly her interpretation of the same scene and I'm looking forward to comparing the two visions (especially next to how it played out in my head while writing it).

Thanks for your comments guys! I'll pass 'em along to their respective artists. Though I'm in the process of convincing a certain stubborn someone to join here and bring some more fresh talent to the boards...

She's a bit of a wallflower at the moment. The legions of trolls at NHC would make anyone leery of joining a new site. She's also got an unfinished post-dome fic centering on Lisa, Marge, Ruth, Laura and Father Sean.

Your comments have been passed along and now it's up to Astray as to whether or not she joins. I personally hope she does. She'll love the reception and various Lisa-cookies that are handed out!