Since I suddenly for no reason care, I'll be reading through and reviewing all the stories on the board.
Another test I wonder? ...nevermind.
I think I remember peeking at some stories/poems (because they were furry) you posted last year, and this story doesn't quite seem to live up to the same standard. Yeah, it's only a sort of "preview", but this preview doesn't intrigue much. Fairly casual scene, nothing all that interesting.
The blend of cats and humans could be developed into something interesting, but we've only uncovered a rough surface here, the fact that there are cats walking on two legs and talking doesn't make the story. Tastes of vanilla!
Doesn't seem like you proof-read it either,
A cat based household with a bunny as a member of family by marriage or what have you, or a even seeing a mouse going out on a date with a fox was common.
Her husband and father to the twins had died only a few days before he died out in the line of duty protecting his country.
Just kind of makes my mind choke up a bit.
Do keep writing if you've got a story to write, but if you're posting a preview, fishing for some positive reaction and encouragement to keep writing, don't post until you've written something that's gonna leave us craving for more. ;(
Heh sorry, nothing personal, just going to review everything as thoroughly as I can, whether my opinion is positive or negative. (=
Er... don't know if you're even around to read this either, I've really got no clue what's going on here at the moment.
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