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« on: April 01, 2008, 10:50 » |
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Hey guys, it's been a while since I've been in here.  Anyway, I've got this idea for a story which I've been really interested in writing and have even begun writing parts of it. Normally I would wait until I actually finished a story before announcing it, but I just wanna tell people about it.  And I figured you guys would like to know too, since it's a Lisa story and all.  Okay, here it is, basically: It's an AU fanfiction set in the future where an older Lisa falls in love with an OC, Mara Morrigan. (older too obviously, and I'm sure some of you guys remember her.) Do not be alarmed, I'm working on rewriting Mara to make her a better character. Plus, there'll be comedy, drama, action... And there'll be song lyrics included as well. I'm still ironing out the kinks, but I have a good feeling about this one. What do you guys think? 
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« Reply #1 on: April 01, 2008, 12:39 » |
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Dark MageIt's a great idea! But it could be improved. Say, Bart (older too), falls in love both with Lisa and Mara, and they all do a thr- *is stabbed, dragged away* As for lyrics, I suggest TCM - "Two Become One" 
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« Reply #2 on: April 01, 2008, 12:47 » |
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Eek... Is this Shock Therapy for LTS?  Well, i think it could work, but i sure hope you put in some cool underground anime references in it, such as Naruto and Sailor Moon characters! It would be so kewl! And make so that at some point in the fic, the girls gain superpowers and can turn by their own willpower into half animal/half humans. Furries rock!  As for the music, i suggest Avril Lavigne and Linkin Park.  P.S. Hey, Dag's idea isn't half bad either, maybe we could have a "director's cut"! 
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« Reply #3 on: April 01, 2008, 15:27 » |
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Dark Mage I'm just having trouble understanding one thing, so maybe you could clarify this for me - you want to make Lisa into a lesbian?
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« Reply #4 on: April 01, 2008, 15:43 » |
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I'm just having trouble understanding one thing, so maybe you could clarify this for me - you want to make Lisa into a lesbian?
That would be the general gist of the story, yes. 
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« Reply #5 on: April 01, 2008, 16:18 » |
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Good job, D.M. Thats throwing a wrench into the norm. I cant really say yes or no, but who knows, it may come out quite well done. Though I dont really know if it could be considered condonable.
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« Reply #6 on: April 01, 2008, 23:23 » |
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Dark Mage Okay, I just wanted to make sure I hadn't missed a memo or something - good luck on writing it then. Though if this is centered around anime-ish characters and settings, then you've probably killed my interest. I don't know why, but I've always had an aversion to just about anything anime.
Shock therapy indeed...
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« Reply #7 on: April 02, 2008, 11:23 » |
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Heh, thanks for the support, George and Laguna.  Serge and Marco, I can't imagine why, but I get the distinct feeling that you think that I'm joking... I mean, sure, the idea is a bit outrageous, and it probably doesn't help that I posted this on the First of April.  So I can see why you might feel that way. But, the thing is... the thing is... It's all true. Everything. Everything I said is the truth. The lesbianism, Mara, the song lyrics... Completely and 100% true! I didn't lie once! Well, maybe that's not true. I don't have a good feeling about this, I have a great feeling about this! So, Marco and Serge, guess what? APRIL FOOL'S!  Bwahahahahaha! * Dark Mage calms down. So, shall I still take note of your suggestions? You two have some uh... interesting ideas about what makes a good story.  * Dark Mage runs off giggling madly, to CONTINUE WRITING.  (Don't worry, George, there won't be any anime-type stuff. I'm trying to make this good.  )
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« Reply #8 on: April 02, 2008, 13:17 » |
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Well, technically, if the starting post was about a true thing, how can it be a fool? The thing works like this.... An April fool is when you say a false thing making it pass for true, and expects people to fall for it. You did the opposite and we fell for it only because 1) as you said, yesterday it was April the 1th, and we were on "fool warning" mode  2) you don't post almost at all into LTS, especially in the story section, so starting off with a story idea where Lisa turns lesbian and especially towards an ambiguous character that it's possibly unknown to 99% of LTS (but that i remember very well of being quite a "discussed" character over at gfc)... with song lyrics (?!)... well allow me to think it was very possible for it to be a joke. Basically, Me and Serge fell for it only because we had a certain "higher" idea of the standards of your fics. In fewer words: you made my head hurt, thank you very much...  * SimpReal takes two red pills
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« Reply #9 on: April 02, 2008, 14:37 » |
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D.M. i have to say that your idea for that kind of story did seem a bit far fetched, but to be honest, i'll admit that it wasnt untill after i read the post date and time code did I realize that you were messing with us. TBH, I have read a few stories like that already so I wasnt sure if you had been on a bender or something or had turned to doing M rated stories 
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« Reply #10 on: April 02, 2008, 15:19 » |
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Um... okay. Keep writing then I guess? April Fools' Day is always such a confusing and frustrating thing for me, I can never tell if someone's lying or telling the actual truth  I'm just glad it's over.
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« Reply #11 on: April 02, 2008, 23:18 » |
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Dark MageIt still seems to be an April joke to me, but if you want to try and write that story, why not? It won't hurt any of us... well, maybe only Braku and Ygg, but we don't see them here for quite a long time anyway... so, I'd say, go on with it, let's see how "citrusy" your future fanfic will smell like.  Oh, and mine and Marco's suggestions were definitely jokes. *makes innocent look* SimpRealGreat, someone would have to take two blue ones now. 
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« Reply #12 on: April 03, 2008, 00:27 » |
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It still seems to be an April joke to me, but if you want to try and write that story, why not? It won't hurt any of us... well, maybe only Braku and Ygg, but we don't see them here for quite a long time anyway... so, I'd say, go on with it, let's see how "citrusy" your future fanfic will smell like.  Hah! Actually, it won't be 'citrusy' at all.  That's not why I started this idea. I'm focusing on seeing if I can make the relationship work. I think I can, but time will tell I suppose. 
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« Reply #13 on: April 20, 2008, 15:09 » |
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An episode where someone goes into the Simpsons universe? Why not continue the story where Homer goes into the human world from the part where he enters the Erotic Cake store? Anyway, Dark Mage, you fooled me as well  But I'd like to see your idea on paper. It would be interesting
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