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« on: January 24, 2008, 23:47 »
There, all fixed. It's not good, but I'm happy with the results. Anyway. Lisa is saying: C4H8O + C4H9OH -----> C4H7O2C4H9 + H2O. And Bart doesn't understand one bit of what she is saying...
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« Reply #1 on: January 24, 2008, 23:58 »
Hehe! Hey not too bad man. Smile I know this is going to sound cleché'd to everyone but, reminds me of my older drawings... My advice is simply keep putting pencil to paper, listen to the critiques, dont be afraid of showing off your work. Smile

Try copying images from drawing guides, or peices of art from impressive artists, or even grab-pics. They embed things like size and proportionality, placement, and remind you to not to shave Lisa's eye lashes off. Wink But at the same time, draw your own idea's. You can always go back to them when you feel you could improve them.

I'll point out a few of the easiest problems to solve;
 - Lisa's eye lashes. There should be 4 on each eye
 - Barts hair should slightly curve upwards
 - Draw the limbs bigger and more rounded. Chubby limbs are easier to correct than skinny ones.

Other than that, nice one! Keep at it. Smile
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« Reply #2 on: January 25, 2008, 00:13 »
Wow, I totally forgot Lisa's eye lashes... Thanks for pointing that out!  Smile
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« Reply #3 on: January 26, 2008, 21:09 »
A drawing I've been working on for a while... Okay I'm lying it took no more no less than one hour to make it... Let me introduce you to the newest Simpson kid: James (the tall one). You all know Eric. And The usual: Lisa, Bart and Maggie. Once again, It's not good, but I'm happy with the results.
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« Reply #4 on: January 27, 2008, 01:49 »
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One nitpick - unless it was intentional, James is playing the guitar left handed. A lot of artists make this mistake, even though it can easily be salvaged. It's the reason why a lot of guitarists are left-handed in amateur pictures. Tongue
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« Reply #5 on: January 27, 2008, 02:21 »
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Yes, it was my intention to draw James playing the guitar left handed, because he's left handed... And so needs to play the guitar that way... Anyway, it was my intention  Smile
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« Reply #6 on: January 27, 2008, 11:47 »
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*ROFL* at Bart's reaction Gigi Made me laugh out loud.
Funny and nice idea, I like this drawing. There are certain mistakes with proportions, but if you keep drawing, they will go away in no time.

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Wow, a complex drawing with good plot... No idea where quite grownup James came from *imagines Marge's surprise Big Grin*, but all kids turned out rather nicely on this picture, even Eric. Of course, Lisa looks the best, in that hat and with her sax. The same remark about proportions applies, but this pic seems to better technically than the first one. For some reason, the style remind me of Casper's. Good job, please keep drawing!
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« Reply #7 on: January 27, 2008, 15:55 »
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"Simpson Kids" is a very good picture. You're progressing, keep it up!
My 2 personal nitpicks:
1) They're standing in a row, it could be better, if you'll add more depth somehow, arrange them in a different way.
2) Please, please, could you make your future pics weight less kilobytes? Smile

You're draw not bad at all, I love the look you give to their faces and the fact you're not afraid to draw more than one character. Nice work!
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« Reply #8 on: January 27, 2008, 16:21 »
Dagdamor and brakusaetsya
Thank you for your comments  Smile

And brakusaetsya, I'll try to make my future pics with less kilobytes  Wink
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« Reply #9 on: January 28, 2008, 19:27 »
Fixed: Moaning Lisa.
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« Reply #10 on: January 29, 2008, 09:13 »
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Poor Lisa... I liked your previous picture more, it's not because of the mood, but because it was... more "compact" maybe? Here, Lisa is just a little part of the drawing, which is much bigger than my screen resolution, so I have to zoom it out to see whole picture, and small details like Lisa's sax become hard to distinguish then. I like the idea of this drawing though. Don't take my words hard please Smile someone else might think different.
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« Reply #11 on: January 29, 2008, 15:25 »
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Ah not at all, as long as there aren't any bad comments, I'm happy  Smile. I have to fix something in that drawing. Lisa's hand just... isn't well drawn if you know what I mean... I'll fix it today maybe. Anyway, thanks for the comment
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« Reply #12 on: February 01, 2008, 18:49 »
My first drawing this week, it isn't very good, because I was like: study, study, study, test, test, test, and if I'm lucky, I won't get any bad grades... Rolls Eyes but anyway, the pic is kinda cool  Smile. So, this pic is simply James walking along with Lisa and Allison or at least what looks like to be Allison..., and James is looking a little... I don't know, annoyed? Use your imagination. Maybe he's annoyed because Lisa is saying good stuff about him and he thinks she is exagerating, anyway, that university behind them is a new university, built after Quimby lost the elections to Barney, at least in that reality... Confused Enough talking, I'll let you judge it. Enjoy.

P.S.: This is probably my last drawing until my birthday.

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« Reply #13 on: February 02, 2008, 09:47 »
Pretty Good stuff there El Barto! I like the new charater James.

Lisa's spikes seem a little big and she seems to have too few though.

I do like the clothes that you put Allison in though and the backpacks you have drawn are ace! I can never draw backpacks.  Rolls Eyes
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« Reply #14 on: February 02, 2008, 13:07 »
LISA: I can't believe I'm going to the university to leave social hierarchy behind me!

El_Barto, nice drawing, if only a bit heavy (again...) But you did a nice job with the characters. Lisa looks pretty good in that hat. James doesn't look as excited though Tongue
My only con-crit: please resize the picture before linking to it. 1700x2300 is just too much, unless you have thousand of characters on a pic. 1000 pixels width is enough for pencil drawings. Aside from that, I like your latest picture. Smile Keep drawing!
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