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« Reply #15 on: October 24, 2007, 22:45 » |
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Both very nice. But I do agree with George. The legs and feet are rather large in proportion to the rest of the body. Some more nitpicks are 1. The underbite doesn't go beyond the neck line, they flow into each other. 2. The neck itself is too thin on Lisa 3. Her nose looks kinda like Fry's. And you have longer hair than I did before I cut it, at least from your charry. 
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« Reply #16 on: October 24, 2007, 22:52 » |
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Nope, its that long in reality too, if not longer.
I see what you mean about the first pic too, but Ill be honest, Im trying to merge my style with the style on the cartoon, you should check my deviantart account to see where im coming from on this....... * ............ That wasnt an advertisement btw, but it does help to get my point of view ^^. The only real accuracey I was after was the face, the expression and the design and colours, but alter the rest heavily ^^
Sorry, it sounds like im angry at everyone, but trust me Im not, Im derranged anyway.
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« Reply #17 on: October 26, 2007, 16:20 » |
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Woha, Syke, that is an very cool picture of yourself, like that very much. And I do like the huge feets/shoes, it is a simple, but nice looking comic-styl, some of your own you can say. :>
Well, like your styl, and I am happy to see more and more (Simpsons-) artist here around.
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« Reply #18 on: October 27, 2007, 21:54 » |
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Nice one, Syke. Cargo's right and your style is simple and pleasant to eye. Something of the anime maybe or not, no matter... The proportions and work with a cloth is good, nothing to add more... And the background is present there, that's good.. oh... (devastated and gone to sleep..)
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« Reply #19 on: November 02, 2007, 13:16 » |
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 I just this day got myself a drawing tablet, so ive decided to experiment with making cartoony images with realistic shading and zero outlines. Hopefully it will work well as I practice it.
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« Reply #20 on: November 02, 2007, 13:40 » |
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Well, it looks very good to be your first try at a tablet, for that, I congratulate you.  However, I think Lisa's hips are a little big, but I know you just like drawing her that way. I just have one question: Where are the pearls? 
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« Reply #21 on: November 02, 2007, 14:03 » |
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I dunno, I figured I would change her style slightly. I love her dress, but I always feel a bit.... Wierd giving her a pearl necklace. I know it changes the style alot, but it didnt look right for the pic. Ill do them next time, but I like this necklace.
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« Reply #22 on: November 02, 2007, 14:06 » |
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Yeah, I like that necklace too. I also love the way you came with these colors so......... welcome to the team. Kudos!
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« Reply #23 on: November 02, 2007, 14:40 » |
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Thankyou very much, that means alot... Mmmmmmm Kudos ^^
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« Reply #24 on: November 02, 2007, 15:57 » |
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The hips are slightly wide but apart from that it's beautiful!
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« Reply #25 on: November 02, 2007, 16:18 » |
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Everyone seems to go on about the hips in my pictures ^^ hehehe, it just so happens that I seem to like them that way. and that I cant draw humans very well ^^ I would say, "I like big butts and I cannot lie"... But I would be, so I wont ^^
On saying that Thankyou ^^ such a nice thing to say ^^
By the way, this wasnt a bitter comment ^^ just clearing stuff up ^^
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« Reply #26 on: November 02, 2007, 16:31 » |
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Awesome pic! If that is your first tablet pic, I'm sure there will be plenty of great ones after it.  And I don't mind the hips. It's your drawing style and it looks nice. 
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« Reply #27 on: November 02, 2007, 16:38 » |
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SykeAhem... Please, don't be offended but it seems to me that she is kinda pregnant  She is lovely and beautiful but be more careful with shading of her dress  Aside that, everything is awesome.
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« Reply #28 on: November 02, 2007, 16:55 » |
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Suusje - Thats really nice of you to say ^^ Thankyou very much.
brakusaetsya - Yeah, I see that now. Well, I thought I would give her a bit of a tummy, as she kinda does have one ^^ a cute one though ^^ and a huge brain ^^
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« Reply #29 on: November 02, 2007, 18:16 » |
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Nothing wrong with the hips being big. That's just the way you draw her - your style. Like mine always drawing to humanesque or too antro like, not my fault, but my roots just like yours. They will go away in time, I know. Again, nothing against that. It is a lovely pic and Lisa seems so alive that you can almost touch the figure. We, I mean,I ('cause I only can speak for myself) love to have you around. We have lots of artists around the forum, so many diffrent styles, so much to learn from each other. Don't you love that , Syke?  Ok , now on the con-crit. This pic seems like a portrait *front view* but for some reason there you can see discrepancies. theres perspective where is not supose to be. Look at her hands, they are too big, I think you wanted to draw an upshot then changed your mind and forgot about the hands. Her upper and lower arm have the same thinkness, and so, it feels weird. Like I said, to what I see, I think you wanted to draw something then decided to do something else, and in the process you forgot these few things that are very noticeable to a third party. All in all, a pretty good picture because is appealing to the eye. And I just love those colors, just watch out to add volume where there is supose to be, only with color, that is. She does look preagnant, though.
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