This is sort of non-cononical to the Simpsons Fantasy story, but it does work as a sequel to it.

Basically after the events of Simpsons Fantasy, Bart returns to his post as Bartman, but for this adventure, (whatever it is) will require Maggeena to rejoin the The Bart Allegiance.

I've not decided on where I want to take this yet.

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INT. SIMPSONS TV ROOM

The Simpsons are sitting on the couch sans LISA and MARGE who arent in the room, MARGE is actually in the kitchen. HOMER, BART and MAGGIE are sitting on the couch watching TV, there's a series of baby related commercials on TV.

MAGGIE: <Sigh>
BART: Mag, whats wrong?
MAGGIE: Huh? Oh nothing Bart. It's just watching these commercials reminds me of the old days.
BART: It's only been a month...
MAGGIE: For you maybe, to me it feels like years.

The previous commercial ends, the next one plays, it turns out to be baby-stink-breath.

LYRICS: Look out its the baby, who's breath smells like death, run for your life it's baby-stink-breath!
BART: WHAT THE?!
HOMER: Uh-oh...
BART: Homer, you're airing that commercial again?
HOMER: C'mon boy, I needed the money.

BART flies at HOMER starting to strangle him.

HOMER: <aaak aaak aaak>

Suddenly outside there is a light in the distance with Bart's head shape cut out of it. It's the Bartsignal.

BART: <thinking> The Bartsignal! Bartman is needed.
BART: <spoke> Gotta go.
HOMER: Whew! Saved by the.... <To Maggie> Actually, what was I saved by?

MAGGIE shrugs.

MAGGIE: I'unno.

INT. SIMPSONS HOUSE

BART runs through the Simpsons house, and into his bedroom, LISA spots him and runs to her own bedroom, BART goes into his closet and closes the door. When he returns, he has a purple cape and cowl on and then jumps out of the window. LISA at the same time has an orange eye mask on and an orange cape, also with a white turban on, she dives out of her own bedroom window.

EXT. SIMPSONS HOUSE - BACKYARD

BART and LISA turn to each other.

BARTMAN: Glad you noticed the Bartsignal, Lisa the Conjurer.
LISA THE CONJURER: As always Bartman.

BARTMAN and LISA THE CONJURER climb up to the treehouse where MILHOUSE is pointing the Bartsignal tourch out the window.

INT. TREEHOUSE

BARTMAN: I have come old friend.
MILHOUSE: Bartman! Lisa!
BARTMAN: So what evil doings appear to be going on tonight Milhouse.
MILHOUSE: There's a letter for you Bartman, in the Bartcave...

ALM
So far it looks okay, although you know what I think about script format :/
My opinion: the "plot" doesn't sound too original, but it can be worked into an interesting story anyway. Heck, even a single good joke, or an unexpected turn can make it a great story. Does your story have it or not, that's the question...

It's been a while since I did anything with Bartman: The Return of Maggeena. But I have finished it now.

It is in Script format.

I guess I should mention something, Bartman: Return of Maggeena is a sequel to Simpsons Fantasy which is another story I wrote parodying the Final Fantasy series and even featuring cameos from various characters from IV to VIII. The line "What I used to do" is referring to that, in an essence (there's a small sneaking section in Simpsons Fantasy where Lisa and Maggie go undercover).


I mostly rely on parody and random visual humour which can be probably why the speech can sometimes lack jokes, seem out of character or just plain pointless. But the randomness is generally what I find funny as you don't expect it and has nothing to with anything, which is what I plan to do when making issues of an MT2 Comic series.