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« on: April 28, 2007, 19:14 » |
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Well I am at it again. in a mix of my minds mental capabilities, I have decided to work on a new fic. This one is purely my own and there is nothing taken from any other shows, comics, or books. I got very sick of doing things that already had characters that i needed to work with, now I am doing one of my own. This one is a dark bit of a life look at one main character and his trials. All of my pictures will in some way corespond to this story. So when I put up new pics, most of them will be illustrations of what I have in this story. Until I get my new scanner, you will have to enjoy this spoiler to "The windrunner chronicles"
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There’s no praying to Life, you simply trust Time and hope Fate and Agony don’t find you…”
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« Reply #1 on: April 29, 2007, 09:16 » |
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So...do you hate the Simpsons or something?
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« Reply #2 on: April 29, 2007, 11:22 » |
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So...do you hate the Simpsons or something?
What does this comment have to do with the topic? If you're not interested in the fic, don't read it. This board is open to any kind of fanfiction, as its summary reads. For any further clarification between you and Laguna (or me) you're free to use Private Messaging. |
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Did he open up his eyes?
Did he try to touch my hand,
Or is my mind playing tricks on me?
Do you think he hears us cry?
Does he understand
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« Reply #3 on: April 29, 2007, 18:33 » |
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I will, however, answer that question. No, I do not hate the simpsons. On the contrary I still remember almost every word to each episode from the first 8 seasons. I do have a tendency to get very sick of things very fast due to limitations.I can only do so much to the main characters to the simpsons, adding one or two off the wall characters of my own design does not allow for me to write effectively. Everyone crits on things like, how well Lisa is portrayed, the things they do, the how they react to different things. I need to work on something that is more open to the genre that I am used to. A mix of regular life story mixed with a sci-fi/fantsy twist.
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There’s no praying to Life, you simply trust Time and hope Fate and Agony don’t find you…”
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« Reply #4 on: April 29, 2007, 18:50 » |
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Nice out of the blue comment right there. I like how it seems like you enjoy flaming or being flamed or disliked by this forum.
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« Reply #5 on: April 29, 2007, 18:52 » |
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Let's return this topic to normal please. I would like to get a little bit of feedback for even the spoiler.
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There’s no praying to Life, you simply trust Time and hope Fate and Agony don’t find you…”
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« Reply #6 on: April 29, 2007, 18:52 » |
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laguna sky
Very well then. Unfortunately I haven't had the time to read your spoiler, but the first chance I get I assure you that I will post a review.
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« Reply #7 on: April 29, 2007, 20:43 » |
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I will, however, answer that question. No, I do not hate the simpsons. On the contrary I still remember almost every word to each episode from the first 8 seasons. I do have a tendency to get very sick of things very fast due to limitations.I can only do so much to the main characters to the simpsons, adding one or two off the wall characters of my own design does not allow for me to write effectively. Everyone crits on things like, how well Lisa is portrayed, the things they do, the how they react to different things. I need to work on something that is more open to the genre that I am used to. A mix of regular life story mixed with a sci-fi/fantsy twist. Thats that cleared up then  About your story, I think it is unwise to have a real president in a story eccpecialy a sitting one. I think you should make up a ficticious president to avoid legal issues. Orther than that, the story is fairly good. Very dark and gritty! Please continue! |
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« Reply #8 on: April 29, 2007, 20:47 » |
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heh, well that isn't going to happen, freedom of speech prevents me from being punished for it  . besides the whole story is based around the conflict in Iraq, though it may be set in a futuristic version of said war. just my little way of coming to terms with the stupidity that surrounds the whole thing. Though I might change the name for the sake of it if I do make it a futuristic one. |
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There’s no praying to Life, you simply trust Time and hope Fate and Agony don’t find you…”
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« Reply #9 on: April 29, 2007, 21:13 » |
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heh, well that isn't going to happen, freedom of speech prevents me from being punished for it . It depends what you write and what country you're in. Google gives me the following about the US - they probably wouldn't have caught you out, but always good to be informed about the borders surrounding such matters: http://dictionary.law.com/definition2.asp?selected=723&bold=%7C%7C%7C%7Chttp://www.rcfp.org/handbook/c02p04.htmlI personally think a fictional president would be better. It's the only way to be certain. people will know who you're talking about anyway  |
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« Reply #10 on: April 30, 2007, 05:03 » |
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Duly noted DB
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« Reply #11 on: April 30, 2007, 20:19 » |
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Here is a little fic that I did after discovering a new song. A basic dream/song fic. For clarification, Angel is the other wolf that will appear in the story very soon. Airidon was the one who finished creating her after he had escaped from his prison.
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There’s no praying to Life, you simply trust Time and hope Fate and Agony don’t find you…”
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« Reply #12 on: May 01, 2007, 18:20 » |
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laguna skyRead the first bit, sounds promising. I don't really understand that worry about the president's name, if you story would fall the victim of censorship because of such small thing, then God save America  but that's up to you whether to change it or not. So far it looks interesting. Gotta read the next part.
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« Reply #13 on: May 03, 2007, 07:26 » |
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Here is a part that I have spent so much time working on. It may or may not end up in the story, but it means so much to me and my heart is broken in it. The True Angel Edit: I took it down for now, I think I should let the story develop a bit first. I will repost the story soon. If you did happen to be one of the few people that Downloaded it, please make no comments on it yet. leave your thoughts untill later. |
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There’s no praying to Life, you simply trust Time and hope Fate and Agony don’t find you…”
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« Reply #14 on: October 18, 2007, 04:02 » |
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Well seeing as how I have been drawing so much, i thought, Man i havent even worked on my Writing a while. So i decided to work more on my personal vice.
This is the opening to the story. it has been posted before, but i have added a bit more. The next installment will be whole new chapter.
The Windrunner Chronicles: Chapter one "The past, The present, and the Future"
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There’s no praying to Life, you simply trust Time and hope Fate and Agony don’t find you…”
F-Fate
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L-Life
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