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Title: Life in Black and yellow. Post by: laguna sky on April 04, 2008, 03:31 Ok so i lied, I'll post this up even though I have no reviews on the Hell and Back thread. This has a Simpsons side to it. You have to just read it to understand it. So shut up and read it. Stop reading this, this is unimportant.
Why are you still reading this? Title: Re: Life in Black and yellow. Post by: El_Barto on April 06, 2008, 17:33 I've read this chapter, and all I can is: It's cool.
So far so good, man. Are you gonna write more chapters? Huh? ARE 'YA?!? * El_Barto goes back to his normal self What? Oh, yeah. Are you gonna write more?! Because, I'm looking forward to reading it :D And I still need to read the story on the Hell and Back thread. Title: Re: Life in Black and yellow. Post by: Miles on April 09, 2008, 20:39 Since I suddenly for no reason care, I'll be reading through and reviewing all the stories on the board.
Another test I wonder? ...nevermind. I think I remember peeking at some stories/poems (because they were furry) you posted last year, and this story doesn't quite seem to live up to the same standard. Yeah, it's only a sort of "preview", but this preview doesn't intrigue much. Fairly casual scene, nothing all that interesting. The blend of cats and humans could be developed into something interesting, but we've only uncovered a rough surface here, the fact that there are cats walking on two legs and talking doesn't make the story. Tastes of vanilla! Doesn't seem like you proof-read it either, A cat based household with a bunny as a member of family by marriage or what have you, or a even seeing a mouse going out on a date with a fox was common. Her husband and father to the twins had died only a few days before he died out in the line of duty protecting his country. Just kind of makes my mind choke up a bit.Do keep writing if you've got a story to write, but if you're posting a preview, fishing for some positive reaction and encouragement to keep writing, don't post until you've written something that's gonna leave us craving for more. ;( Heh sorry, nothing personal, just going to review everything as thoroughly as I can, whether my opinion is positive or negative. (= Er... don't know if you're even around to read this either, I've really got no clue what's going on here at the moment. Title: Re: Life in Black and yellow. Post by: Vanguard20 on August 30, 2008, 18:34 What's with the talking cats?
Title: Re: Life in Black and yellow. Post by: G.H. on August 30, 2008, 18:54 Vanguard20
I'm currently on a computer with no means of opening a Word document, but if I had to take a guess at what you meant, then I'd tell you that anthro/personified animals are usually a part of Laguna's writing and art. It's a style, nothing more or less. Title: Re: Life in Black and yellow. Post by: Vanguard20 on August 30, 2008, 19:20 Vanguard20 I'm currently on a computer with no means of opening a Word document, but if I had to take a guess at what you meant, then I'd tell you that anthro/personified animals are usually a part of Laguna's writing and art. It's a style, nothing more or less. Oh, OK. Title: Re: Life in Black and yellow. Post by: laguna sky on August 31, 2008, 15:08 yeah, in all honesty, I am going to request this particular thread to be taken down (whether by it being deleted or locked.) This was never intended to go anywhere and it was originally going to be something quite bad, even by my standards. So to Marco or Serge, You know what to do please.
Title: Re: Life in Black and yellow. Post by: SimpReal on September 11, 2008, 21:32 Sorry Laguna, a PM would have worked better. :( It's my fault, i very rarely check this section.. i just have not the material time.
Anyway as per your request i'll lock the thread. I don't like deleting.... feel free to ask for reopening anytime you want! |